Tuesday, October 13, 2009

The exam (story) The love story



Today, I wrote for my exam . A story , short stroy ,I worte it n It is worst !

It was alomost recess time in our skul , there was visibly moob change .Even our mathematic teacher, Mr.Lee was agitated quiet in his chair ,The bell rang , Singals the recess time of student. Mr.lee stride out from the class, and we run !

We ran toward tuckshop. We stop when we encouter a teacher .They r so slow, they waste our precious recess time. I'm alw the 1st one who reach the tuckshop. I order a gravy mee n sit in a huge table for finish my lunch . I did it as fast as I could , bcz I stil nt fisnih my Ans-Maths. So ,I rush back to my class. I alw dash.

This is the 1st time I collide a gal. 'Owh~ ppainful !! ' she was fallen n sat on the floor. She expressing her suffer . 'Oh my god! I'm sry~ ' I apology to her. I help her to get up from the floor.

She is pretty. Her smile is charming. I think I never seen her in this boring skul. 'May I ask a question ? ' I feel interesting in her. 'sure' she smile sweetly. ' hmm... R u a new student ? I think I had never been seen u in skul. ' ' Oh yea... I'm Ashley. I'm going to be the part of 4sc3 student .Hw abt u ? ' she answered. Her answer was shock me ! Oh, it is a pretty match .It is unbelievable. ' I'm the 4sc3 student too . Haha...... I'm ken . nice to meet u . " yet , " sry , I gtg nw,I stil nt yet finish my MT homework.I'm going to die soon . See u later, bye. "

As wat I expected. She was lead into our class n introduced by pricipal. She sat in front of me . This is a gud chance for me. I lv her, I lv her very much . I'm fallen in love with her!

We alw discuss homework n share hapiness togather. A couple months later, we couple. Just like others couper, We alw 'stick' togather and it had mention by her parent. Her parent is a traditional parent n wont allow their daughter has special relatinship with boy. She suggested break up with me n I accepted.

My life bcum blindness. My life is dull . I bcum depress n hopeless. Hw cn I lve without her?I cnt!! I cnt!! I'm heartbroken , heartbledding n sad .

she noe I'm had a tangle change either in mental or physical. Her gaze is alw fallen in my body m but she never talk to me again ...

This was a freshly morning. I receive her call. ' Ken, I gtg. Sry, I wil b have my new life in Kl. I'm sry I cnt b with u through the world end. I'm sry for the leaving . Anyway, I hope u get better soon. Bye. " she informed me like a reported show in the televisyan program.

since the day , We had parted away n never seen each other ever...


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oMG,, iT IS abt 430 words thr.. This is the worst short story in this world !! I cnt have the proper time to write it . The surrounding was noisy n I cnt concentrate my story very much. The Article was very hard too.. I take abt 45 min to finish this story. bUT. I noe it is bad...

I cnt decribe the sadness of the character very much. I wil b inprove .. sry ...

Any way ... Thx for viewing.. lolx... (comemnt yarh )

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